Wednesday, January 11, 2012

Meta Fiction: A family's story

  It was a starry night with a half moon. A girl named Ellison and a girl named Mary were living in a small wooden house. Ellison suggested about chain talking. So, Ellison started.

  It was a dark yet bright night. The night was starry with a half moon. The win blew gently, and the fog was drifting slowly.
  A small wooden house was built high up in the mountains. A small family was living in the small house. They family consisted of a mother, a father, and a young daughter.
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Then, Mary sipped some hot cocoa and continued.
 
  A family was living happily. The father was cutting down trees and catching fish. The mother was collecting berries and the family were eating delicious things for dinner. Their daughter was 3 years old, but she had a very serious disease. Her mom and dad went to the hospital, but the doctor just said that there is no medicine for that specific disease! The parents were so sad and disappointed.
  
썸네일  Mary ate one brownie and continued.

  One day, the daughter was just left alone at the house. She was lying at the floor, crying and there was no one to comfort her. She crawled to the door but then she hit her head at the sharp edge of the door.
  
  She cried and cried. Fortunately, the mother returned with lots of bunches of berries.
  "Oh, my cute daughter. What happened to you?"
  "Mama! If fdo..."

  Of course, she was 3 years old! But she pointed to the head and the mother found out the blood on her head. The mother called the father and together, they went to the hospital.
 
  Their minds sank deeply when the doctor said, "Unfortunately, this girl has serious injury in her brain and she's using all her life and strength to learn knowledge. She will be a genius, but after 820 days, she will be sadly... dead."
 
   Ellison continued, eating one sugar cookie and a cup of hot cocoa.
  The mother and father cried. The doctor felt sorry for them, so he told them the dangerous but the only cure. When the parents heard this cure, both of them were very shocked. The cure was trying the first peculiar brain surgery! And the chance to live was 50%! They might have to sacrifice their child. However, they gave the child to the doctor and prayed for the god to help them.

썸네일  After one day, the doctor went to the parents and congratulated them. The child was alive! Also, she was a genius! From then on, the parents lived happily ever after with the genius child. The child grew and grew and grew and became a very beautiful woman. She married a very rich man and lived happily.

   Ellison yawned. Mary dozed. Together, they fell into sleep.

1 comment:

  1. This is really great! "Chain talking" is something you should try with a friend. I like what you did with this. One of the best ones I've read. A happy ending for both the family and the two girls.:)

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